This was really dark the third stanza was my favourite it was so haunting n powerful, well done

Wow, dark and brutal. The line "I am Death and your time is come" is so powerful, I absolutely love it. Please continue posting your dark poems, I am very much enjoying them!

~jas~

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okay just kidding.. so THIS is definitly my favorite.. i mean its soo perfect.. the word choice is truely spectacular and the rhymes and flow is flawless.. the description is great.. all around a really great poem and enjoybale read