Unexplained

by browneyessoul   Jan 19, 2007


Pain draining your life
Hurt draining your mind
Love keeping you safe
Lying when you say you're fine
Nothings going right
So you wonder why you put up a fight
Its not like ne1 wants u around
They wont shed a tear when ur rotting in the ground
U cant cry
U'd feel weak
Dont bother saying a word
Cuz they wont hear u when u speak
Your words mean nothing to them
Youre just a whistle in the wind

(i still need to think of more, its a working progress)

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  • 17 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Its a lovely poem it actually reminds me of my dad (an evil man) i cant wait to read what you think of next.
    you are a very talented writer,
    i cam tell you write from the heart, the way you describe everything.
    thank you for the comment hun. 5/5
    xxtake carexx

  • 17 years ago

    by miss4re

    Hmmm i like but i would like to see what thoughts you come up with for a happy poem, just would be interresting. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    Hey thats pretty good for a 5 minutes work..lol..I like it...good job

    ~*~Elisha~*~

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