Comments : Heavenly transition

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben,
    You are a very talented writer, Your writing reminds me of someone I know I just cn't place the name. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very deep and stirring write. Love your word choices and the flow is excellent. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice rhythm and rhyme. It flowed so smoothly and delivered a powerful message. I enjoyed this one. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really very unique way of writing, loved it all the way.

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I had to read this poem again. You really have done an amazing job on this!~Bravo~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow this poem is AMAZING!! i loved it so much! 5/5 Kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I just loved it!!!