Beautiful simply beautiful!!! keep writing youre way good!!

Almost feels like a story here. Excellent!!!!

This was GREAT lol i lovd it, i dont think ive read one of yours quit(cant spell lol) like this its just great
oh nd by the way im back from camping nd it was awesomness

I'm pretty certain that this is my favorite love poem by you. the way you described that kiss was amazing. my favorite part was definately:

I can feel the perfect imperfections on ur lips

i felt myself melt in my chair. wonderfully written. 5/5

Wow such great emotion i loved it you always no the perfect things to say in your poems nice work!