Comments : Loving You (Part 1)

  • 15 years ago

    by Perfection

    I find it impressive when people rhyme and still stick to storyline. Thats why I liked this 1 very much good job..

  • 15 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a really good poem...i really enjoyed reading it..written very well...and it had a great flow..i love it! great job! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sondos

    I'm in two mind's on this. The content and words are beautiful and it's obviously a subject very close to your heart. I really loved it in that sense

    I only have one issue that's with the rhyme which seems just a little cliched and forced. But this was a VERY good poem. Thank's for writing and sharing. I'm glad i read it. 4/5

    Sondos

  • 15 years ago

    by lala

    Wow, it's amazing how well some people are able to rhyme in their poems, you're one of them! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem was simply precious. i loved how everything flowed, and your emotions were so candid. great job on your writing, and keep up the amazing work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow a very touching poem,liked it,good job,keep it up,5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I really like this one! Very sweet sentiments and lovely rhyme scheme! I like the happiness held in this piece too. Can't wait for part 2!
    Debbie

  • 15 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW this poem was so excellent, i can also relate to it, cant wait until the second part comes, still excellent poem i give u a 5/5 all the way

  • 15 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Ah Joe this is very very very good you leave me speechless, im proud to be itallian because of you =D

  • 15 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    Wow..thats all i can say..wow. great job, going to read the second part now.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Ths part is so sweet n full of love i loved it....5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful portrayal of love. The first feelings of love are wonderful, you have captured this in your words. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Hm.. well i can tell this poem comes from the heart and you obviously feel strongly.. however... and i hate to be mean but many of the rhymes you used seemed forced and the flow wasn't very clear.. but it still a very heartfelt poem

  • 15 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow that is soo beautiful. Nicely done.
    The poem was such a heart warmer.
    I'm sure whoever this is for loved it.
    Keep up the great work!
    God Bless 5/5

    ~Tay

  • 15 years ago

    by Ellie

    Ur poem was pretty good i liked it a lot

  • 15 years ago

    by Alyssa Lauren LaVelle

    It kind of makes me wanna cry..
    good job

  • 15 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    The emotion here is wonderful and fluid, but the rhyme and flow seem a little forced into the piece. I think that if you were having a hard time rhyming, perhaps free verse would have done nicely. I do love the feeling and the depth that springs from your words, however. *5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Great poem poem Joe. =] keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Awe, Joe. This was so sweet. I liked the part when you mentioned about wearing the red...lol that was cute.
    ___

    "When I close my eyes it's you I see,
    And nothing can compare.."

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    ^ Loved those stanzas. Excellent write!

    -` Glenduh.

  • 15 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaaaaah gr8 poem i like it allot