I really like this poem. It was very well written. nice job. 5/5

I really like this one tooo!!!! The questions are good and many of which people wish sometimes so it realates to many. The rhymings were good too except for feel and revealed, it didn't flow as good.
The ending was simple though, I was expecting a more piercing one after those insightful questions.
Still alll in all very good, I find you have a great talent playing with words!