WOW

Good job! Keep writing! Take Care Cindy

Short but powerful poem, you're really talented. 5/5

I'll tell ya, you tap into my sub-conscience with all your poems, I feel this one and I also think many others will connect with this piece aswell. Short and sweet (Short and evil >:D)

I loved it,
~Richi~

I Like This..Short And Sweet....Ive Felt Like This Before...

I couldn't have said it better. good job on this one :D

I liked this.
Even though it was so short, you managed to pack alot of emotion into this, and the depth and pain screams through the words.
I liked how you swapped the rhyme scheme about, that made it more powerful and hardhitting.

I like it very much. It is greatly written and topic is excellent. It is very short but still interesting and impressing. Great poem 5/5

Wow, this as short, but different and so pefect! i liked the way first yo stated a question, then you answered it, without losing the rhyme scheme. great work 5/5
mezmeryz x

A great poem. 5/5 from me.

Tho it was short it still deserves another Wow! <33

Short but still good....

i think again you should change "wanna" to want to...and "gotton" to gotten...and it might read better if you break the lines apart.

but good job.

It was short but you got the point across nicely. i loved the way you did this.