Wow. This was really good. It flowed well. & Had very beautiful imagery. It was sad. yet amazingly penned. Your word choice was fabulous!

Amazing job, dear. Keep it up

Bri.x

This is a very touching and spirtiual poem in my point of veiw. Very good though 5/5

This is my favorite poem of yours, it's amazing!!! i love how you wrote it, and the words you used, and it flowed so well. you're an amazing writer, i can't wait for you to write more poems!!!
5/5

Forever*Yours

I didn't understand this quite myself, but it could just be me.

This is awsome dude, love the wording, paints alot of pictures for the reader, 5/5!!! leep it up!!!

I actually like the last word "Tranquility", it made the poem finish well.
keep it up
xxxxxx

Wow you really are a unique and excellent writer! great flow and great idea again wonderful job 5/5