Comments : He's gone

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'll be on my way though
    I'll carry on
    As for you though
    Screw you your gone"

    What an excellent ending!
    True girl power if i ever did see =)
    Love it!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Hey i loved this !

    Laura
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I can relate this one very well. Nicely done. But I think you should fix the length of sentences so they would be more alike.. Anyway, loved it 5/5
    Take care
    xoxox