Beautiful! I think its harder than it seems to write about nature, but I think you really captured the essence. Excellent job!

~jas~

Ah, so beautiful. The imagery is superb, and the flow and meter flawless. A goregous piece. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5

You have written this with such beautiful words. Excellent Job!

Wow, very nice poem Noni, it's been a really long time since I have read anything from you. I always remembered your nature poems the best. You seem to have that essence about you, the calmity, the peacefulness to write such enchanting poems on nature. I really liked this one. Gave me chills, well, it made me shiver! lol

Beautiful, excellent choice of words, and I just love nature poems. :]

I'm lost. Maybe I need more sleep!
It still sounded be4autiful beneath all the confusion. 5.5

A very descriptive sort.

- em

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

Beautiful write 5/5

Wow, that poem makes me want to go outside........ 5/5

Wow.. i dont usually like nature poems.. but this one is wonderful... it doenst matter if i enjoy the topic.. the easy flow and choice of words make for a very enjoyable read.. great work