May all of your dreams come true, this is just so sweet. U really hv the art of sharing urself so wonderfully.

loved it

all the best and take care

Sad and beauty masterfully entwined. excellant work

I dont know how you do it but this is another very good poem cindy, you have a wonderful gift, i give it a 5/5!!! keep making them!!!

Your poems are so beautiful and heartfelt, they are truely special.

Cindy, this was so sad but so beautiful at the same time. This flowed perfectly, but there was one bit where it says 'layed' and i think it's supposed to be 'lay'. but it doesn't matter what one it is anyway because it doesn't make any difference to this special poem :) xox 5/5

Very touching and beautiful words Cindy!

Now I fear the break of day
You leave with morning light
Hours are so hard on me
Yearning for the dark of night

This verse especially speaks to me....almost a hidden meaning there. :)

Great as always! Debbie

This is exactly what I'm going through right now.
Sad.

Respect...over those beautiful words
mind/thought is a very powerful force

Seems this 5 button is getting a another work out...

Wow, this is very emotionally stirring. It got me, I don't know how you're feeling right now, because I haven't lost someone I loved that much, but I know when I will, it will hurt. You're such a strong woman. A role model for everyone.

Hey Cindy,
a beautiful poem filled with the deepest emotion from inside your heart.
This was so well written, it flowed very well indeed.
Much love, your friend, Tara-Kay

Love it

Really good poem u snapped on this one girl :)

I really enjoyed this poem mostly because it fits me exactly. I can totaly relate to how you feel!

This was very good. you're a talented writer.

This poem is soo fri ken good
havnt read a reali gd peom in ages
well done!!!!!!!!!!

Exllcent poem great writing. Enjoyed it alot. WiLd RoSe
Pls comment on mine thanks

Really beautiful. I can relate to it.

U made me cry gurl!!!

Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotions. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

You explain exactly how i'm feeling....you are a wonderful poet