Wow, this was very hard hitting, so effective though, i am very sorry ur going thru this, i hope ur poem woke some ppl up and gave them a big slap round the facxe :) anyway well done n i am sorry,

DAMM SISSS
I can see now why we're blood
yu possess so much talent babe
yu need to let it out
juss like yu said in this poem
people need to see yu shine
me n dave see yu glow every day
we be rockin shades whenever we wit yu to block the rays
now yu need to make other people blind by ya beauty

Its good, i like it. It means alot to you.