Comments : Breathing in the mud

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is so good, much way better than anything i could ever write. and thank you so much for the comment, i was so happy when i read it. thank again shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Linzii

    Hey,
    Your work is really good. I enjoy reading it keep up the good work!
    ~Linzii

  • 17 years ago

    by maddy

    Hey ur a great poet. rlly deep and understanding of things. and u can rlly feel for the words. oh and thx for the comment by the way.

  • 17 years ago

    by nightstalker

    Such a beautiful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss MakeUp

    So off the wall and i luv it.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The last para is the best. so great read. i just could read it so easily, and i loved that in any poem.

    i gave it a 5. cause the title and poem itself is individual. great.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Love it! flows great and i loved alot of the words you chose! great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Very interesting however I think that, the last verse was kinda of missing something, not sure what it was though so I cant really help srry bout that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Very good.....

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Another amazing poem. You write amazing dark poems! keep them up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria O

    I really like this poem. keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Half0Empty

    Wow, i really like this

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    U know...it has a very interesting flow....seriously
    dont know if its intentional...but its flow is paradoxical to the content of the poem..
    almost a kid like song flow with deep depressing sad lyrics
    very good work...i loved it...5/5 from me =D