Alrighty i think thats an itro poem but i feel theres two poems in it but i like it it sounds like a secret when u read it if im reading it wrong sorry

well mabye comment on one of mine

i love it though its very uneak
-kei (hope)

Wow amazing as always keep it up! you are so talented, many thnks
sweets
xox

This is also a very good poem! It makes total sense to me! You are an awesome writer, and I hope to read alot more of your poetry. Great Job!!! 5/5 from me!! (thanx for the comment!! ^_^ *DeadGirl* )

Thanks 4 ur comment on my poem. i really likr ur poems as well. keep up the great work.

~K3!$3Y~

I like the poem as a whole, but misunderstand the whole double line thing, are the two intertwined, i.e. the love is the blade? or is it slightly separate. I liked the ending, but feel the poem is not overly clear, maybe that is your intentions i do not know,