I really liked this poem 5/5 u definitely know how to play with the words u used in this piece so keep it up
x!x

This is truly a great work of poetry, greatly done. it touched me

Hya love the poem really deep comment mine thank x

Hey Great poem!!! The Rhyming is really good, but some flow is jumpy, but overall Really well done! Awsome job!! 5/5 xoxo

5.5

a superb intense piece.

This was so very sad...but so beautifully written.
I loved the imagery and wording.
This was a pleasure to read.

Brillent poem, really enjoyed reading it 5/5 well done!

Well i like this poem, great job sandra, in the last stanza "what if one day you are gone" is what it should read since its in present tense and no commas in the sentence, other that that it is perfect, 5/5!!!

Well done here. the emotion was clearly evident. and the story behind it was perfect.

keep writing. 5/5 David

I loved this. I loved how u expressed your feelings when you were sad and the way you took your anger out when you were mad. Great use of words. Wonderful job on this one. 5/5 keep up the good work.

I loved this. I loved how u expressed your feelings when you were sad and the way you took your anger out when you were mad. Great use of words. Wonderful job on this one. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Wow. Long but worth the read. Slightly vague, but still meaningful. Like I said, word choice could use some improvement, but other than that this is a great poem. 5/5

First off the rhyming seemed a bit forced but other then that it was good...

The ryhming did seem a bit forced but it was still a good poem so all together i give it a 5/5

I cant tell if it was forced or not but I like it overall. You were able to express your feelings quite well. It also made me think as well. Really nice job:]

You expresed your feelings to your lost love so well with a perfect flow ..good work

I know you just said it,
But I need to hear it again.
I don't know why,
So don't make me explain.

I cant say anything about this piece coz I couldnt find even a single flaw in this piece. Truely outstanding 100/100. You deserve it really.

Tc
Fsams

Beautiful poem with a deeper meaning. yes it is about letting go but it could also be about holding on or at least wanting to. amising poem very well written:~)Sam