I like the metaphors you used in this piece, and the way you put it all together. Great job. I particularly liked these lines

"I feel there's nothing left of me.
I feel like an angel with a broken wing,"

Overall great job on this piece. Best wishes and blessed be. *Athame* 5/5

Awwww. i dont really no how to compliment the poem, but AWWW/

pisture-i think you meant picture.

The metaphors and similies, complement the
poem so well. It's an amazing piece
reflecting upon the message. I like how
it is written. Great Job.