Comments : The Bell

  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Aahh... the hell of school.... we all know that pain.... the title is fine, i personally like it.... good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ahahaha this made me giggle, especially the last stanza.
    I liked the repetition of hell and bell I thought it gave a bigger impact.

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Haha i love it! great write babes!
    I think maybe this should have been in the funny poems section, but that just me i supose!
    Great rhyming, and yes you do like Hell and bell!
    5/5
    Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a great poem, keep up the great job, i like your works.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I like the last stanza, it's awesome!!! i hate school too, but i go to a catholic highschool, so i don't know if "hating" is allowed, oh well... great poem, i really like it!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I love it .
    It did NOT sound like crap compared to my poem . It made me laugh . haha I like the repitition and all .
    Good jobb` [:

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    I don't like the title because it doesn't do justice to the poem.
    I really like this poem and I can relate to it because I swear I don't know how I'm going to get through the rest of my schooling.
    I HATE school
    this is an awesome poem!! keep writing!

    and about that dude, if he doesn't understand then he's worth breaking up with. You deserve better then that!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Lol. I really think this should go in the humor part. Pointing out the fact that it's just you know in class waiting for the bell to ring and just sleeping in class and having class be a total bore! Lol. But very well done. I really enjoyed this poem. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Too much school, need more breaks.
    Jeez it's hard to stay awake.
    Another day inside this hell.
    Oh thank god! There's the bell!

    dont we all wait for the end of school bell. i know i do too. well done

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love this oen.... it made me giggle! hehe the flow is good, the wording is better

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I know what you feel by this...I hate school and all that jazz... I loved this poem it was wonderfully written