I really liked this poem...the way u put a more realistic ending on like every fairytale know to man...it was great definitely 5/5
x!x

Interesting story and a melancholy look on fairy tales. But, you also seem to hit a point, because it seems there never has been such a thing as a perfect ending. I found this poem to be extraordinarily original and well written. Very good job.

Wow,you're excellent,so moving but so heart aching a great mix,5/5

This is the most amazing poem ive read in a really long time!!! seriously, i love it!! i love how each fairytale had a different ending, ur an amazing writer!!
5/5!!!

Forever*Yours

I really like this poem. You're very creative. 5/5.

Wow hun, this was so beautiful, and so easy to imagine. keep writing, your so talented. love your work, keep it up.

Haha, I found this so sad, yet hilarious at the same time. I liked how you took happy endings and made them sad.
A job well done.

Wow gal dis poem is so moving it was reli touching i was almost crying n im not 1 4 crying. i loved it. well done.5/5. mazieX

That was beautiful! i love how you took a different stance on happy endings. i loved it. awesome!!!!

Unique is definitly, if i must say, i've been on this a very long time and i don't think i've read anything quite like that. its sad..but it is so true, firstly who knows that wasn't wahat the ending to them really was! and secondly, there is no such thing as a happy ending, thats why i always hated fairytales..but i love this.

you hit home with this one, and its so cleverly done. just keep up with the good work xx