Wonderful! I love this poem, I can understand the emotion behind it. Good poem! Sorry to take so long writing back.

"She wants you,
to hold her,
to touch her,
and to kiss her."

You wrote "her" 3 times in 4 lines. A little repetitive.

"Is it lust, or sexual attraction?"

^What's the difference?

Describe your subject. Instead of using "She" a gazillion times you can say "this girl" or "this woman" or "One". Widen your vocabulary.

I hate to say this but I will, this poem is not a 5. You were lucky.

3/5.

I enjoy repetative poems! Eh, oh well. I like the last line and the emotion was true. Great job, and so far out the poems I have read by you, this is my favorite. Keep trying!

Hatori

I absolutely loved the last stanza, it was the best. The entire poem was quite amazing, but that last stanza... boy, oh, boy! I loved it. Lol. Great job, Hun. :D one of your best.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was well written.

My favourite stanza was:
"She wants you,
to hold her,
to touch her,
and to kiss her."

I can really relate to this. It was a great read. 5/5

Kalee

Amazing poem. so parts are repeative, but I tadds to the charm. Youd di a wonderful job.