You are a great witer...this was so deep! im sorry that this had 2 happen 2 u..if u need 2 talk im always here..

good job!

Wow im so sorry! :[ at least you got a good poem out of it! totally kidding tat sounded really mean. but seriously great job. your really tallented! keep it up

I know the horrible feeling of a cheating spouse aswell and you captured the emotion amazingly. You are extremely talented. Keep it up. [not getting hurt of course, the gret poems] 5/5 :]

marcella

This was so very sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
I liked the repetition, I thought it had great impact.
You are truly talented.

So the poem was AMAZING once again.. the flow was perfect as well as the rhymes.. however.. i dont understand it when you say you fiance wanted a child to share ecstacy.. ??

Omg idk how i just entdered my comment i wasnt finished.. lol.. i dont think thats the way you use the word... idk it just sounds funny to me but im prolli wrong

The wording and passion were magnificent. keep up the work.

This was really deep, and the wording you used in this truelly expressed how you felt. I'm sorry, again, that this happened to you. An amazing poem though. Keep your head high. 5/5

Tammie