This was a really clever, original anology, very well written and thought out.

This poem is nice...well thought out and very clever

Nice poem

Thanks!

Thanks Ali!

Thank you.

I really like this poem..
It's deep..
very nice!

Thank you!

The flow was off
I felt like it needed more structure
the emotion was almost there
the idea was really good
loved the metaphors
nice work
4/5

I loved it,
great comparision.
who ever thought you
could be like a pencil.
Amazing.

-Amberinaa*
xoxox

This poem was so sad.
i just love the way you have written this poem
brought tears to my eyes
best wishes
and take care

Wow i never thought of a pencil lke that before great use of words keep writing
laura-