Excellent write. . .really enjoyed it. . it was so honest. . . .keep writing!!!

Good.

Ah, man, open relationships - not a good sign.
I know that must have stung.

"Please don't tease me with thoughts of love
Please don't try to be my friend, I'm not a shoulder to rub

You had your chance and now it's gone
I hate being second best, but I've been it for so long"

I relate. And I remember...

Great rhythm throughout... well done, lovely poem.

.blush.

Very good. not quite ur best, but still great.
you write with such emotion in all of ur poems and i love that.

well done.

Wow another great poem. I used to be able to relate to it, sad I know. It is a deep poem. I know thats a painful thing to go through. I don't know why anyone would ask for an open relationship that might as well end the relationship right then and there. Everything was great about this poem and I see nothing wrong that needs fixing. Another 5/5