This is a very clever idea, i especiallyl loved the line:

those scars represent a love that was for real.

i've never thought about it like that before but it was a really original way of writing, keep up the great poems.

Really Good. =) great great job! 100% I loved the rhyming pattern it was outstanding. I personally love end rhyme poetry. =)) check and comment mine sometime! Id appreciate it

*Megan

Wow that is a very great poem

Heyy tat was a beautiful poem, and it was real too...actully u might be happy 2 hear this cause i joined rite now cause i read urs n i liked it...it is so true....wen ur in love it's not u who suffers but ur heart and wen ur out it's not u who ahs 2 face the concequences but ur heat. i don't think anyone deserves ur heart expect 4 god n 4 me i've had mine broken but the good thing is u learn. ur heart's ur best friend and no matter wat it'll be with u, and remember ur heart never lies......

Awesome poem you are so talented. i loved it and thank you soo very much for the comment. shanik

Wow girl that was great!
i wish that i was as talented as you
i love your poem you are my fav.

Blow my mind away how u wrote this piece, the way u wrote it was real it was great

Wow sounds like you've went through what I'm going through now! What an excellent poem!!! I feel this pain too.

Hi Cathy, very nice job on this poem, but you would not stop reading because one book was bad, the same as you should not stop loving, because one love went wrong. I have been down that road, and loneliness is a terrible place to be, so love again and take your chances, it might just be that you find the one true lov. good luck Harry

Awww. Its sad. Nd awesome. I lovd ur poem.

This is a great poem and I love the way the words just flow Thank you for your kind words on my poems