I'll never give my life up for your lies.
I'm staying here until my very end.
You'll just have to deal with it soon enough.
And I just have to say, you're a stupid friend.

I loved this stanza, it was my favourite part.
I thought the flow and imagery were good and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and wording, you did a great job on this.

Excellent. I love this poem. I connected with you. Seriosly. I love the title dearest. It is... somewhat hilarious. Good match of a title. Your rhyming structure was well done. and your emotions were connecting with me through the idea of a stupid friend who lies to you. So great poem. I'm proud to say i voted 5/5

Well done, i liked it, really a nice job. good flow, good use of vocab, great job 5/5

Great poem.. something i think many people can relate too.. great rhyme and flow

Well done. Everyone has a 'stupid friend' in their lifetime at least once. And we can do nothing about it, but hope that they won't be such an idiot as to leave you there. In the end, they end up leaving us and we're heartbroken. And nothing can be done.

The flow was really well done. And I didn't seem to have a problem with many of the places, so I think it was alright.

The emotion was not really here. Maybe that was intentional or maybe I just didn't see it. I'm not sure which it is. But for me, I just didn't see it. Keep the writing up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow i didnt know you've written so many poems!!! i dont have that many ideas haha. great poem homey. lovz TaRa

Ahh wow.
i take it you were mad when you wrote this?
very nice poem.
=] i really like the topic too. a lot of people have friends like that. easy to relate to.

"I heard it all before again and again.
I'm sick of saying sorries when I turn around.
I know I'm being bitter about it all.
But why do you always bring me down?"

Excellent write m'dear
The flow was flawless and you really managed to get the emotion out there and show you're not taking it anymore.
Excellent poem sweets
5/5
*Gem*