Oh my goodness..this is amazing... keep it up!

Wow that was great 5/5 keep it up.

Wow this was amazing. i love reading your work. its so good and i like how you rhymed this. and how you broke up the stanza's. great job!!!!!!!

Amazing write!!! In the first line of the fourth stanza deciet [should be ie] Besides that I think this is written perfectly. 5/5 again!

marcella

This was frikken excellent!!!
I really loved this one, it was just so...wow.
I can't even sum up how I feel about this except to say wow.
You did an excellent, excellent job with this!

Oh my gosh.. definitly my FAVORITE! by far.. this poem is just amazing.. flawless flow and wonderful word choice along with great rhymes.. very clever and written beautifully the only thing i dont understand is why you say plastic in this line "Tell me of your hidden plastic gashes."

Wow, sheena, that was pure passion right there. at first i didn't feel like reading something long, but i saw the comments and thought i should. i was glad i did too. the wording is wonderful. i love your vocabulary!

This is amazing. My favorite stanza was the second one and I love this line; "Change can hurt but love can defy." Excellent. I can't describe how well you've written this, it seems like you put so much into it and it worked out so well. The emotion, phrazing, descriptions, flow, rhyming, it all fit together perfectly to make such a strong poem. Excellent write. 5/5

Tammie

Nightingale
^^ is that suppose to be one whole word or seperate ones?

Other then that I could feel some emotion seeking out. I thought that this is also another good poem! 5/5

Wow. This was just.. breathtaking. I love the emotion, description & everything in this poem. The flow was flawless. Nothing seemed forced at all. & Your choice of words was wonderful [as usual].

AMAZING. Simply, amazing.

Bri x

I like this poem. very discriptive and it makes you feel like your there.