Wow, this is a powerful poem, u have a great talent for writing. my fav line was "it used to be alright" i liked ur references to "rusty" it was v effective, well done

You did a great job of making the reader visualise your deep emotional saddness and scars. Hopefully you dont resort to using the rusty-blade that you talk about. Its good to get those feelings out - good write, definitely.

Such a dark and inviting poem, the imangry.

5/5 always David

This poem is very dark.
Yet satisfying my reading needs of the night.
Your are my inspirtation.
=]

Ive been there as well, if cutting whats your talking about, sometimes death seems the friendliest way out..if u like this topic i have one called SWEETENED DEATH that you might like, its pretty far down so just search it...