Hey this is pretty good i like that its short to coz that means i dont loose intrest b4 its finished. congrats on a gr8 write. could u comment on my poem 'don't make my mistakes'? it would mean a lot tnx

Nice job on this write. Take Care Cindy

I love this poem! You're a great writer! Can you please comment on mine? :)

Amazing poem. I really liked it. 5/5