I really liked this poem, one suggestion would be, how did he die? Maybe you could make a second part? or possibly make this one longer. I really enjoyed reading it, keep it up.

WOW! i loved it. it gave me chills. death by stereo, it says how he dies!! it says "and it was all for you" it was talking about the army, right? hmm. i dont know. but, still. GREAT poem.

I'm sorry for your loss.
This was a good poem. I'm rating 5.

A beautiful poem. full of emotion. u brother must have loved his friend alot. i know i would jump infront of a bullet for my best friends. i'm sorry for ur what happened though. 5/5 for this poem.
love willow xxoo