Wow...the pictures you painted with your brilliant words were amazing. So deep and intriguing...it's wonderful
Great job.

I think the last stanza should say "mess with the treasure", i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Wow.. i really like this poem.. amzing write.. good word choice and nice imagery..

Wow, I really like how this one flows. I never suspected a dragon. Nice.

Bravo good work this bit was my fav
Caress and stroke,
Upon sweet misery;
Come close,
And suffocate senselessly.

Beautiful write, great flow and great wording, really a wonderful job 5/5

Extrordinary imagery, it was quite a captivating poem! The part about suffocation and the dragon from hell were my favorite parts. yes spanish class is my "dragon from hell."

Another great poem by the girl of district columbia, i really like the style you used in this poem and also i like your word choices they are great. you done an awsome job, keep up he great job as you are really one of the most talented poet here.
another 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

goran
a poet close to you, living in northern va

Cute poem.. i like it a lot.. the flow was good as well as the word choice i really liked the first stanza however.. its just al ittle of because the whole poem is 4 lines and that one is 3

Lol like this, cute, love the rythm to =)

Omg GREAT imagery, LOVED THE WAY you write keep up the great work

I really enjoyed this read, the imagery was clear and wonderful, really powerful. I liekd the fact that these lines were so short, yet told so much. I liked the style and structure of it. The flow was also good. I really enjoyed this, you have clear talent. I was hooked from teh begining. keep up the great work! xx

I'm not sure I liked the ending as much as I should, but I enjoyed the rest of the poem immensly. It's very deep and just simply amazing. You don't rhyme and I usually hate nonrhyming poems, but your flow is perfect which makes it great. Keep it up.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Really really good! loved it!

love the flow of it... and the way you put the words... and most of all i loved the ending...

keep it up!

Wow.. amazing. I loved every bit of it. I normally don't like poems that don't rhyme, but this one didn't need rhyme to make it good. The flow was very good. I loved you word use; they were so descriptive. You did a very lovely job writing this poem!

Keep writing!
Cayce

That was an awesome poem....thanks for the "comment back" haha....5/5...comment back(lol) if you want haha