Comments : First time..redone :S

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    This poem is so awesome, you know what your awesome, and everything you do is awesome...lol, keep writting the way your write hone...xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Hmmm i know you dont like the first one but i think i like it better sorry i dont mean to be rude :-]

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Good stuff muchy but it urs and that
    means i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherish

    Yay another brilliant poem...look laura im not having this im fed up with you making me look bad :( xxx