This was awesome! The emotions and power behind the words was so real and deep.
keep writing,
Tara-Kay
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Its beautiful hun but so sad i really hope you're alright... havent been on here in ages ive missed ur poems you write beautifully :) xxx

Wow sis! who is this to??? ras?? r u guys having issues again? aww either way i wana no. i am so sry u r leaving this person and that they lied to u again!!
stay strong! remember never will i lie to u! :)
and ull never have to leave :)
ily!
5/5
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this is some of ur best work!

Usually I don't like rhyme schemes such as this but this would probably be one of the few exceptions.
I really like this poem.
Are your words from experience?
it seems so. I can sense the anger!

That's right, you take a freaking stand, lol. There is a time in life that it is all just enough crap. This poem was simple, but it has a way of getting the reader all fired up and ready to take some kind of positive action, to better their lives in a way. I like it.

huggles,
Eleesa

Yes. its a really great poem. it, in my eyes, shows how people can final;ly get the courage to stop being abused or wtv! 5/5

That is a great poem I loved the way you put the words together
_Jamie

Good..