Excellent job! You did very well putting this story to verse. Kept my interest from beginning to end.

I liked your choice of words and the rhyming doesn't seemed forced at all. But I missed puncuation!

For the content; I like the idea and it was well written. :-)

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror

Wow great poem, not only dose it flow beautifuly but the imagery is astounding! love the poem!

Omen

An excellent read. I really enjoyed it. It had an exceelnt flow, great imagery used, and the vocabulary was just wow. An amazing read. One thing that i didnt like though was how you didnt use any punctuation. I thought if you added a bit of punctuation it would of been brilliant! Anyways keep up the great work! I loved this .xx

I loved this! It was beautifully written. My daughter loves cinderella so I've seen it more times than I could count lol. So I know it definitely works well with the actual story, though your poem has it's very own originality. Very well written. 5/5

marcella

Wow.. what a really wonderful poem.. a very enjoyable read.. great joB!

I like the way you have turned fake into reality lol congrads it worked well :D

xxx alex xxx