It was cute ,great for a childs poem ,they would love the ending.

Awww soo cute!

* thanks for commenting on mines.. oh yeah.. i don't wear make-up...

Excellent work...very sweet poem,...wonderful write....sweet ending ....good work!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Nice one ,, it's good,, keep it up .

good job

I love it

Thanks

Haha here i was thinknig it might be the reaper or something and its just a kitten.lmao. good childs poem. i like it.

victoria