Although fairly short, this poem was very good... It flowed nicely and was very well written... Your usage of words always makes for a superb read... Well done xx

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This poem was beautiful. i have only one suggestion for improvement:
Covered in white and covered in gold.- instead of the second covered, use gllttered, sparkled, or something along those lines.

I really likred this, particularly the opening, and I liked how you repeated it at the end, I thought that had a good effect.
The imagery was wonderfully done, as always.