Congrats to winning! This poem was very good and full of questions. I like how you ask your questions. In my own interpretation (which may vary from what you intended) is that sometimes ppl can look appealing but not truly be somebody you want to meet. This was an unusual approach cuz most times we judge unusual ppl and don't see their inner beauty. But in this piece it's like your saying that GOOD looks can be deceiving. Wow! What a twist!
Charisma*

I really loved the way You wrote this poem... There's so many people out there who are both beauty and the beast and I loved the way You got this message across... Very nicely written as always 5/5 xx

Great message in this and you wrote it very well. I enjoyed this one a lot. 5/5

marcella

I think you meant *frail instead of *fraile.
Apart from that, I think this was wonderful, it was very creative and original.
I loved the use of beauty vs beast, I thought that was an excellent idea.

Another wonderful one.. the flow is flawless again the the rhyming is great... the only thing i dont understand is how beauty is covering her eyes in the last line.. the rhyme just seems forceed

I don't know what to say about this poem; however, i love the way you toook the title and created it into something deep and thought provoking.

There is alot of meaning in this poem, and I love reading that. I like the concept of people that can be so beautiful and have such a terrible personality or no heart at all. I've met too many people like that, and you did a great job on writing about it. Nice word choice too. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is great. has a deep meaning. i wanted to keep reading, hoping there was more. yep yep.

perfect. 5/5 David

Good job, that poem sends a very strong meaning. Well done for writing a poem showing that if ur beautiful it doesn't neccessarily mean ur beautiful on the inside, and same goes with being a beast.
5/5 :]

~BRiDDY~