Damn, I think I like this one out of all your other poems.....hope u keep writin them....

Man..... what has this girl done to you? Your poems are so sad...... keep up the good work... 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess

I reallu like this poem 2 your really good with the love things

Flow...was a tad forced because of the rhyming. It didn't seem like the rhymes were working well. But the imagery made up for it. I do like the last stanza. Of course the imagery of the rest of this piece was great and worked well to come to that point.
~Faith-less

By god I loved it. I was a little spooked but hey, that shows how good of a poem it was! o.o
Seriously. It was awesome.
5/5 Deffinately.

-Ally

I loved the last stanza, but the whole poem kinda spooked me. its very well writen and full of feeling 5/5

I love the imagery.
Its what kept it going. It got more and more intense.

another favorite.