Oh wow very long and sad. I loved it. Very well written.

Dude another cool poem, I think you should try writting stories like books or script plays, i dont know if you do or dont, but if you dont then you should try it, you would write really good scripts or even book, but yeh keep up the awesome poems...peace, Alx

Hearbreaking but beautiful. Such emotion and clear visuals. A truly wonderful piece

Hearbreaking but beautiful. Such emotion and clear visuals. A truly wonderful piece. I agree with Al you have an extraorinary talent for showing detailed imagery and raising emotion. You should seriously consider a writing career