Destiny is a funny word it can be what you want. If man believes he is weak then he will be weak if man believes he is strong he will be strong. Nice poem and truly deep. Very depressing.5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Amazing.... it's a great poem.
i love this bit:

I'm sorry for ever worrying you
I'm sorry for the stuff I've put you through
If I could go back in time and change I would
so many things I would alter if I could

i have wanted to do taht so many times. i feel that a bottle in one hand a ciggarette in the other can calm my stress levels. (even at my age) but this poem has true feeling in it. 5/5
love willow xxoo

Alcohol... the teenagers primary weakness. Mmm things are crap without drinking, well so its seems. Very inspirational (well, for and image that is), written well (as always).

Love Niquee

Aww, sad. Very... what's the word?
Inspirational? is that spelled wrong?
Well, not too isperational, after all... in the end it says you're gonna kill yourself. nicely done.

Are you really done with drugs? were you ever on drugs? whoa, not my business. sorry.

anyways, as i said, nicely done. good job. 5/5

Don't give up on life so easily. From the bottom of my heart I wish I could eliminate every ounce of your pain! For now, peace and love to you! 5/5

Wow, thats deep I can relate

I really like it. For some reason these confessions seem to be your style. But hey its different. Thats fine by me. I like the rhyme. And I know your story, so to me this makes sence. Great way of showing emotions. (with the poem I mean lol) But in the 4th stanza, when you tried to connect it into the 5th it kinda lost its rhythm into something new. But the rhymes you used kinda made up for it. Wow amazing how that works out. Lmao, great!!! Keep it up. (by the way you are soo making me a crave a drink. p.s. you suck!) j/k
skittles

Aww.. This was very sad, yet very captivating. Alcohol is a very bad thing to get addicted to. The poem however was very good. I loved how it all flowed together so nicely. You choice of words was also very good. You have a lot of talent and i'd hate to see you leave this world without sharing a lot more of it. So don't give up. Stay strong!

Keep writing!
Cayce