Very cute. You have quite the imagination and way with words. I love the details. Great.

I liked this poem.
Good job.

Very nice. Liked the imagery you had going on in this, it worked well.
The flow was good, but I did stumble on the 8th line, maybe it's a little too wordy??
Also, on the third line, it would read better as "breath-taking".
But overall a very catchy piece. It was a nice read.