When You Look at me

by will   Jan 30, 2007


When she looks at me
with her beautiful
passionate brown eyes
I cannot help the feeling
that i get inside it cripples me
to my knees.

When i see her looking
into my eyes my heart
begins to dance n beat
so fast I cant help but love
the way she looks at me.

When you smile at me
you make feel so happy
and honerd to be in your life
it means so much to me
when u smile at me
cause i know you respect me.

When you say u love me
I cannot help a single tear
drop roll down my cheek
with tears of happiness
and how happy i am
to be loved by the beautiful
girl with the brown eyes..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice, I could feel your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

    Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

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