I like the truth in this poem.

Lovely poem...although you might want to change
"he don't pick up the phone"
to
"he doesn't pick up the phone"
that just sort of broke the flow for me...but all in all this was a good love poem, and it's hard for me to rate this when I can't relate. But it was great and emotional! so 5/5

This poems great... good job,
you have alot of talent! :)

Mm crappy feelin indeed, but also the nicest. error; he don't --> doesn't

So touching and beatifully written,so great,well done,5/5

I really liked this poem, you wrote out what a lot of people are feeling and keep bottled up inside, i can't imagine how you must be feeling about this guy but it sounds to me like you've got it bad, i just hope things work out for the best for ya :)
Another great write and a 5/5 from me
Well done.

Over it was pretty good 5/5

marcella