That was wonderful =) You captured the pain, sorrow and anger perfectly ^_^ A perfect 5 although it deserves much more =)
Rhea

I like that poem, it is very sweet and so truthful, although I don't really like the chorus or the top and last paragraph only because it doesn't sound right...I think it can be reworded better and then it would have a better flow, but then it would really good,
not that is isn't good already,
but yeah just needs a little work,
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