Wow! It was so touching! very very good! ur getting better and better!
ur buddy Desari! heeehee...i see u! lol

I never knew you could write poetry...and write it well. This, as much as id rather not admit it, was a good poem clown...i shall pay more attnetion from now on.

-Jason-

Nice read. You have a special gift.

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....