I really enjoy this poem keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment on my poem.

Love
Kala Dearing

"I no longer have to question the how or why, for the answer always comes back to you"

i totally loved this part.. sooo adorable.. painted an awesome picture of the way u feel

your last line just blew me away.. such a great dedication to the love of ur life.. it felt so simple, yet oh so strong.. i adored that line..

your poem contained such sweet words that so vividly described ur feelings, the reader cannot help but feel engrossed him/herself.. it really tells me that u feel that u belong here, with the person who has ur heart..

ur rhyming, and flow were great, even tho the lines were a little long, but thats fine, coz ur content overruled :D

gr8 job
im sorry this came soo late, but i hardly ever sign in at P&Q coz ive got so much to do with skul and evrything.. (whoever thot being a junior wud be so hard :S) lol..

one more thing.. i reli loved ur use of the word "shant".. it caught my eye and made me appreciate ur poetry more.. obviously ppl are alredi in love with ur poetry, judging by ur ratings and the number of comments :D

"no constraints"
keep up the talent
thumbs up :D

Wow. u have a great voabulary range, which always makes for a great poet. i love the descriptive nature of it, it gives us a feeling like we know what love really is. if there were a way to put it into words, that might just be it.

grat job and thx for ur comment,
~sore

This is good work keep writing

This is good i hope u can read some of mine

Really liked it!!!

I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!!!! COULD YOU COMMENT AND RATE SOME OF MINE...THANKS!

Gud one... esp loved the finishing stanza!!
Keep writing!