This is really great. I showed my mom, and she really loved it, said it was so true! Good job!

Knowing that was from the heart makes it all the more special. good write. 5/5

Cindy this is so sad....they do grow up too fast....just babies for a moment.

"My days were always bright
With you my darling boy
Waking always with a smile
Filling all my moments with joy"

I remember that little cutie too....he was a happy fella and smart too....still is :) I'm very proud of you both. Keep up the wonderful writes! A joy to read. 5/5

A very touching piece, its great to see the importance of a child through a mothers eyes. he must be very special. xox sam

This art of writing ultimate poetry seems to be flowing in blood to me.. :o)
this is just so emotional...so nicely written...could feel the warmth dripping from every single word...loved it dear...keep writing

all the best and take care

This is so beautiful. You're very lucky that your son has the opportunity to show you how much he loves you and show you that he's there for you like you were for him.
Awesome.

This is sweet. it was nice of you to write a poem for ur kid, perfect flow, and as always a 5/5!!! keep writing!!!!

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

What a beautiful dedication to your son. I know you are very proud of the man he has become. Nice job!

Beautiful...words for your son

In my book.....10!

Really touching

Wow this is good it kind of reminds me of my own mom your a good writer I gave it a 4/5 nice work!
*kaila*

An awesome tribute, keep up the wonderful work,
love yur friend, Tara-Kay

This poem made me cry i couldnt finish reading i have to go apologize to my mother.

That s so beautiful 5/5!!!
I love things like that, melancholy and longing for the past :)

Aw amazing.. its so sweet when you see the tables turn and the beloved child ends up looking after the mother and father that kept them safe and happy all those years. That just the sign of good parenting. I can see how much you love your child and its sweet to see that instead of talking about the sadness and all. Nice work

This is another nice poem! filled with love... well i'm only 18 dunno how it feels to be a mom... but u decribed it all in you poem! awsome.. keep it up always ...

This was so beautiful and so sad.
You have such a way at capturing emotion.
Excellent work.