Comments : A Mothers Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This is really great. I showed my mom, and she really loved it, said it was so true! Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Knowing that was from the heart makes it all the more special. good write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy this is so sad....they do grow up too fast....just babies for a moment.

    "My days were always bright
    With you my darling boy
    Waking always with a smile
    Filling all my moments with joy"

    I remember that little cutie too....he was a happy fella and smart too....still is :) I'm very proud of you both. Keep up the wonderful writes! A joy to read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    A very touching piece, its great to see the importance of a child through a mothers eyes. he must be very special. xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This art of writing ultimate poetry seems to be flowing in blood to me.. :o)
    this is just so emotional...so nicely written...could feel the warmth dripping from every single word...loved it dear...keep writing

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This is so beautiful. You're very lucky that your son has the opportunity to show you how much he loves you and show you that he's there for you like you were for him.
    Awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is sweet. it was nice of you to write a poem for ur kid, perfect flow, and as always a 5/5!!! keep writing!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a beautiful dedication to your son. I know you are very proud of the man he has become. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Beautiful...words for your son

    In my book.....10!

  • 17 years ago

    by megan

    Really touching

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow this is good it kind of reminds me of my own mom your a good writer I gave it a 4/5 nice work!
    *kaila*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    An awesome tribute, keep up the wonderful work,
    love yur friend, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by AwakeInDreamin

    This poem made me cry i couldnt finish reading i have to go apologize to my mother.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Sorrow

    That s so beautiful 5/5!!!
    I love things like that, melancholy and longing for the past :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw amazing.. its so sweet when you see the tables turn and the beloved child ends up looking after the mother and father that kept them safe and happy all those years. That just the sign of good parenting. I can see how much you love your child and its sweet to see that instead of talking about the sadness and all. Nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another nice poem! filled with love... well i'm only 18 dunno how it feels to be a mom... but u decribed it all in you poem! awsome.. keep it up always ...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautiful and so sad.
    You have such a way at capturing emotion.
    Excellent work.