Nice poem, very simple. Never jump! :)

~jas~

Wow this was an interesting poem. Full of confusion, sadness, as well as a tiny shread of hope. I think however that you should never take the jump, especially if you know that there are people out there that care about you, because if you were to do so then it would only case lots of pain and heart ache to everyone that loves you. But I love the thoughts that sometimes run through peoples heads. Nice work.

Like the way u took it out.. Like almost fighting with urself in the head... great poem :)

To questions like that the answers always "no". :] I really liked the poem though. Very well written. 5/5

marcella

Although fairly short, this poem was nicely written... I liked the way You started off each stanza with a question and I especially like the ending... Well done 5/5 xx

This was very good writen. I liked the question thing at the begining of every stanza

This one is amazing, i love it!!!!!!!!! but i really dont think jumping would be worth it if you are going to lose someone if you do it.

Jumping is not worth losing the ones you love and hurting them so deeply

Wonderful poem. You did a really good job with this poem. It was short but I enjoyed reading it very much. I do not think you should jump because life is precious, hold it tight. Very well written 5/5 keep up the good work.

I can definitely relate to this one, too. The back-and-forth decision is written quite clearly, and I really enjoyed reading it. My only suggestion is to work on word choice-- use a thesaurus to come up with some more creative words to prevent repetition.

(5/5)

Very VERY cute message, doll. Love it. I have written many similar to it, actually. I like the repeating question.

Be careful with using "I" too much!

:)

This is so sweet, it flowed so smoothly, 5/5
it was very descriptive and emotional
gabriella

I liked how you started out with a question...this poem was nicely written good job!

Short, I'd like to see it a little longer, for longer poems usually have more to offer, although this was very well done. the flow was ok in the first two stanzas, but I felt the last two stanzas lacked a bit. Over all it was good.

Peace, Joe

AWW sooo sweet and sad.. I love how you describe keeps on repeating different questions, because people do ask themselves that all the time good job! 5/5

This was a great poem! and thanks for the comments you left me! most of my poems are un appreciated

Very well written. I loved how each stanza started off with a question. the flow was good, and the emtion clear. I enjoyed this very much.
5/5

This poem was good
it was great
except i think you should have used endured instead of tolerated

Wow.
I love this.
I thought it was going to be like a story
But it turned out it wasn't.
I loved that you didn't talk about
But only what he did do.
That was creative of you
And for that,
I will give you a 5/5 :]

Nice and simple. the details were very well put, 5/5