Caught out

by Benny Boi   Feb 1, 2007


Although it feels so good,
You seem so distant,
Holding you tight and loving,
Yet you seem so cold and far,

What is happening to us,
We used to be so close,
Loving and Tender,
Ever waking moment was splendor,

Now cold and hollow,
I struggle to burrow deep,
To see what has made you this,
Cold... empty lover,

Went the distance,
Saw what has made,
I am too late,
Feelings have been misplaced,

Now i confront you,
Your tears like a bleeding heart,
Sorrow is all i feel,
I was Unfaithful...

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  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Tragic in a heartfelt way. teary eyes for this one. so sad. beautifully written. amazing word choices and deep emotions. i love it, i love all your work.
    --lovedorughtmelody

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Benny
    You have done an amazing job on this poem!

    Although it feels so good,
    You seem so distant,
    Holding you tight and loving,
    Yet you seem so cold and far,

    This stanza really stood out to me. How much our actions can affect someone elses heart.
    Excellent job!
    5/5
    Love your Nana Cindy

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