Comments : Regret

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This really is good, Girl. You did an excellent job writing from this point of view. And so many...too many...teens think too late about what they've done, instead of just stopping and saying no. So sorry this happened to her. But I'm sure she'll get the strength she needs. Keep strong (just like with everyone else that's done this) (*sigh*)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! You are sooo good! Your ending to this was like the punch in the poem and it was amazing. I think this poem has touched me the most thus far!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Krathia

    The last two lines were simply spectacular. 'Treacherous heart', indeed! Good poem.