Wow this is really good. i have a suggestion for you though,maybe writing it in poem form? but juss a suggestion.you are an amazing writer!

I really enjoyed your poem. Like Curry said maybe put it in a poem form. If that's the way you like your poems to be, then keep them that way. Keep writing. Your really good.

Awe sweetheart...i have a friend like that.
i mean she gave up all faith on me but somehow i keep on believing that she'll come back and be my friend again..and well i mean she hasnt thanked me for it, but i mean i told her she means the world as my friend but i dont think she beleives sorta hurts me a little more than i wanted it too be.! but we're trying to become friends again just hope she doesnt drop me!!!

love always
Laura

Thanks for reading my poems this poem is great too!

I like it alot i feel the same was with some of my closest friends.

Very much a trueful poem...i felt it was real.

I love this poem! 5/5 i love it! my favorite!

Wow. this is awesome. i wish I had someone like that to stick by me through everything. My friends tend to be there and then leave. 5/5 from me! and thanks for ur vote and comment as well! it meant a lot!
~Promy

I really like this poem it kinda reminds me of how i felt with my parents keep up the good work

Awww that was sweet i have a bestfriend also i wrote a poem about and she was always there for me n im glad she never gave up on me.But nice poem keep up the good work

YOUR POEM IS GOOD
BUT JUST TAKE CARE THAT YOU
DONT REPEAT THE SAME WORDS
TO MANY TIMES IN THE ONE POEM

This got to me, "I abused your trust, I pushed you away but you never gave up and you never gave in. I pained you and told you to go away, but you were still there to the very end."

how i abuse her 2.... but now im glad i can see how shes really in back of me helping me up if i fall this poem was great thanks for helping me see...

Nicely done, and am glad that you recognize her for what she is . a TRUE FRIEND. keep up the good work. and form doesnt matter when it is a writing from the heart. thankx for sharing Harry

That is really good... I like it allot keep writing.. and thanks for commenting my poem

Wonderful Poem!

Ive never had a friend like that. It must be nice. and wow-you must have constant inspiration or something because you have all these poems .

This is a good poem.. i like it =D

Wow!This is so..real I luv it!It shows how to never give up on the ones you love.Keep writing!Your really good!^_^

Now thats true friendship good poem

This is really good i loved it 5/5 all the way.....