The life within itself. this poem tells the truth, and the truth in turn will open the eyes of many. i really loved this poem, and you are certainly a man of wisdom. In my culture, wisdom comes with age, and age comes with life. lol there is an old saying, you have to earn your gray hair.

I like it.. it's well done.. course i dont know what some words mean but o well.

The poem is Beautifully penned...very well expressed..Kp up de good wrk...an easy 5/5!
Tk care!
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